I would if I could

Its about understanding that you can't change the past

If i could give a name
for fate

 

I would be twisted all the same

 

If i could live another moment

 

I would wish for one-thousand more

 

If i thought there
Was a chance
For redemption

 

I would spend all my time on that

 

But its not there
I couldn't care

 

Its all the same

Never ending
every year

 

 

 

Reviews

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Oooo, that was very well worded. :o I loved it! :D It was greatly potent by the few lines it was about how things can't be changed ^w^ it was awesome! Woot WOOT! :D

[Cwortknee]

You speak the truth! It's terrible isn't it? Well composed. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!

[Ruth]

Continous mayhem, the circle is always spinning!
Beautifully composed xox

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx so much Poppy :-D

[Ruth]

Most welcome xox

[Heather]

we can't change the past but we can learn from it... well done!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much heather!!! :-D

[LadyBug]

TEAR :,( So true yet sad.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

it is isnt it

[LadyBug]

YES :((

[anxia]

Found this emotional piece just when i was thinking 'if i knew it then i would have ........' Nice. you voiced it very well!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx so much :-) im rly happy you found what you needed

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Emily, A very sad but poignant piece. Well set out in a 'stark' exposed style that feels like the struggle to understand life and its often meaningless futures.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx so much john!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Allycat]

Such a meaningful poem
wonderful job :)
thank you for sharing!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

its always my pleasure allycat!! thanks for reviewing :-D