I only see you

this is a poem about seeing for the first time that special someone that shines above all the rest

I've never seen a soul

Gleaming in the light

 

That can match

Your eyes in darkness

 

They really are too bright

 

Yet I want to look

To stare into the sun

 

They've burned out of my head

Now you're the only one

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[S]

Its a sweet emotion of love that guides into writing such fine poems....

[Helena]

Such a magical moment when you realise that some special has come into your life. Lovely!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thankx :-) It truly is something amazing I think thats why there are so many love poems out there just because its such a grand thing its hard to encompasse in a single one

[The Refined Poet]

what a powerful description of love and desire.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thank you :-) It is what I go for

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

It takes an introvert to have this one-pointed devotion. I know this mind-set all too well. Admiration lighter by the darkness endured.

I very much appreciate your poetry Emily.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I always base my poems off myself and I'm a huge introvert lol so that explains that. I'm glad you like my work Michael :-)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Since you have come on the WC, I'm keeping a keen eye on your work. It's mostly music to my ears and props to your introversion Emily.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im glad to have your attention :)

[Tomi]

two thumbs up for this...
"I've never seen a soul
Gleaming in the light
That can match
Your eyes in darkness"
great write..exceedingly great!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx Tomi im glad you enjoyed it

[Otaku-chan99]

aw this is soo beautiful! Great.. just great -sob- :'D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx taku-chan! :-) ur comments are so kawaii

[Otaku-chan99]

lol i know right, and your welcome :)

[MissEpic2902]

This is beautiful!! I'm really sorry I haven't been able to approve it sooner!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol better late than never :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed it

[MissEpic2902]

You can say that again! thats a moto I live by! lol it's nothing it really is a great piece!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww your gna make me blush lol

[MissEpic2902]

Lol Sorry! I'm Just telling the truth :D

[Spookers]

They say eyes are the windows to the soul, and that's why people like certain eye colors because different eye colors mean different thing. Like different eye colors mean a different personality, or so I have heard. This is a nice poem. Short and simple, but to the point.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

just like me lol

[Joey Johnson]

Sweet poem.

[ROSALIND]

I love the flow of the words