lil horror child

lil horror child

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
"

poem about a childs soul being tormented into insanity because of the cruelty around her

"

 

 

Little one

You sit so still

 

With Blank

And empty eye

 

I've seen you everyday

 

Slouch down

Begin to cry

 

Big, Blank sky above you

Rain smears sorrow

Down your face

 

Skin turns Blue

And heart turns Black

 

Bursts; leaves no bloody trace

 

Crazy girls hear voices

Wretched Whispers

In their heads

 

Horror girls

Will scream inside

Until they fall down, Dead

 


 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

© 2014 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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Horrific imagery Emily! Spooky, dark and very scary.

Thank you for submitting this to my gothic contest.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brilliant poem, very well done I love your choice of words it was eerie and haunting. "With blank and empty eye" fantastic line.

Posted 6 Years Ago


very well done nice metaphors cool flow really haunting makes me read more you know how poems make you want to read the next line very well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

thanx so much!! I'm glad it caught such a good flow
You sit down with a blank and empty eye. I really like your choice of words in that line.this is a pretty dark write. Well written. I can't believe how many poems you have. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

exactly!!
Deron Alexis

6 Years Ago

lol my mom does not even know i have a note book of poems and she's not really computer literate so .. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

lucky you lol
This is a Wonderfully Written Piece. Its Spookiness and Macabre content Grips you as the Sudden reality creeps in and you realize. This is reality. Excellent Job especially with : Crazy Girls hear voices, Wretched whispers, In their heads

EPIC!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

I'm so glad you liked it! its a personal favorite of mine :-) though my mom tried to send me to a .. read more
Jordan's Back

6 Years Ago

Well Most people Read My Stuff and Trip out too, Read Insomnia :)
I know a horror girl. muhahahah, great job!


-Co-founder of Never ending night,
Dracula

Posted 6 Years Ago


David the writer

6 Years Ago

It's np. Thank you for sharing some fear muhahahahaaaa
Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

always a pleasure to share a little darkness ;-)
David the writer

6 Years Ago

couldn't agree more ;)
I agree that it sounds like a horror type nursery rhyme. I can almost see a group of children, holding hands, and then picking which one is going to be "dead" when they spin in a circle! (not literally, of course....lol - a game)
Well crafted with picture and font style to accent the bold nature of your words!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!! It's a personal favorite of mine and it can disturb some with delica.. read more
it reads like some macabre nursery rhyme....pretty compelling

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

thanx! Its one of my favorite :-)
Dark, deep and mysterious. Quite a read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

thanx so much its a personal favorite of mine :-)
interesting.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

thanx .....

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Added on September 2, 2012
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Tags: horror, child, death, dead, insanity, crazy, bully, abuse

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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