Issac Neuton

Issac Neuton

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A poem about Isaac Neuton

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Newty, Newty

Clonk on conk

Motions made you clumsy

Tick, tock

Distance

Go together

Watch that marble roll

Drop an apple

Drop a feather

One day help

Predict the weather

Newty, Newty

In a book

Students, Students

Look, Look, Look

He made some laws

Because his noggin

Shook

 

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© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.



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This is absolutely hilarious and very much accurate.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

1 Year Ago

lol told ya so! :-P and thank you!
Funny and i like it haha

Posted 1 Year Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

1 Year Ago

Glad it entertained ya lol
I laughed and smiled, u made me happy! :D A lovable write! 100/100

Posted 1 Year Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

1 Year Ago

I'm glad I made you happy lol that makes me smile
Katerina

1 Year Ago

:D ur welcome!
Definitely brings a smile to one's face. A playful piece indeed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

1 Year Ago

I was in a very playful mood :-)
lol, what a cute poem, definitely should be read in a school room :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

I know right!!! I wish my teacher had lol
I liked this poem :) Newty Newty. Loved this. Great job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

lol thanx!!! :-) I was feeling silly
This is a very light-hearted poem and it is a refresher from the normal gloom and doom poetry rhymes that I write and many others try to imitate.....Thank-you.....
100/100

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

Thanx!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) dramatics are all well and good but sometimes you ned to write.. read more
Andrew N. Farrens

2 Years Ago

indeed.....
Oh, that was a fun read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! :-)
What a fun piece! I like all the sound effects, it really gave the poem a life and movement of it's own. Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it!!! :-)
Dr. Seuss-like. From that perspective I like it, although the tone seems to trivialize Newton. I'd say if you're going to criticize such a genius, I'd go after the fact that he was a functionary on a council that worked for the Inquisition, mixing something serious and disturbing in with a child-like perspective could come off really good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

im glad you enjoyed it. if ur so interested about the inquesition why don't you write a poem about .. read more
James William Dyer

2 Years Ago

lol. temper temper
Emily Dickinson Jr.

2 Years Ago

no im serious

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Added on September 18, 2012
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Emily Dickinson Jr.

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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