Murderer

I wrote this poem its short and i was going to put it in a story i'm working on

Walking down these halls

I remember the old me

memories come rushing back

at that point I realize

this isn't me

I'm not who I want to be

I am a murderer

For I have killed

the old me

 

Reviews

[chillz]

deep!
great work much enjoyed
chillzxxx

[Sarah E. Pearson]

I agree with Gracie. That was DEEP Julie. But its also so true. Lately everyone has been loosing themselves and changing themselves into something they arent.

[KAREN]

Great, excellent write! These words spill out meaning!

[Grace Catherine C.]

Woah, deep man!

[Jim Parson]

You've said so much here with so few words. You've captured the realization of losing oneself perfectly. Although this works fabulously as a short piece, I was just about to write that it lends itself to something much more ambitious when i saw your description and think that is totally the solution...build a story around it!

[Eile MacIntyre]

Short but AWESOME! Simplicity means perfection in my book.

[Short.Nerd]

Wow. This was a great write! Nice job!:)

[Chelsea]

This is really well done! I think a lot of people come to the realization that we lost our old selves. Or as this poem says, murdered! But I guess, that's life, searching for the real you!
A really great poem, simply said but I can totally relate!!