Spider webs

Lies are just a disguise to make us feel despised

When you told me to hide, I never revised

I hadn't felt such a blow, until I was taken by the undertow

 

It was like a spider web, choking you until you're dead

You want to get out of bed, but you've got a heart full of lead

Your throat closes up, and you feel like you'll never make it through the rough

Your stomach churns while your eyes burn, your trying to handle all the world twists and turns

 

Its time to move on, but you keep holding on

Your mind says lets go, while your heart says please baby no

Its all just a test to see if you can make it through the rest

Once you've gotten this all of your chest, you'll no longer feel stressed, you'll be blessed

 

Written on May 21, 2011 *(5-21-11)*

Author's Note

*I don't like liars..
Thoughts?

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes its such a fruatrating experience to be lied to. You put it nicely together in two verses.

[Sujash I. Purna]

great philosophy here. "It was like a spider web, choking you until you're dead" very sagacious about lies and their ramifications. Honestly, I rarely have come across such a sage piece of poetry.

Keep it up!

[Rose Tyler]

My favorite one