Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Lucia M.

The water flowed
Upstream,
Against mildew rocks
And flailing fists,
No longer struggling
To flow against the stream.
The current singing, 
Like a sad ballad,
All night. 

© 2011 Lucia M.



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Great imagery and tone to this piece that carry it well! Like the water flows, so does this piece. Nicely done!

Posted 11 Months Ago
it makes me think of giving up a fight.
either by way of surrender,
or acceptance.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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 Added on December 6, 2011
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Tags: drowning, water, stream, current, sad, short, dying

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Lucia M.
Lucia M.

Honolulu, HI



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shy. enjoys everyday things. aspiring writer. favorite books include All Quite On The Western Front, The Bell Jar, and others. favorite authors include Vladimir Nabokov, Kurt Vonnegut, Ernest.. more..

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