The crawlies..

This is something which I feel is very relevant in our societies which are divided into different classes when they are ideal to be one!

It so happened ages ago in the land of reptiles
Two lizard generals fought about textiles
The striped species which were the reigning ones
Imposed their wear on the common species and their sons.

The great heroes on both the sides
Began a fierce battle coupled with might
The field covered with bodies ripped apart
Angered and stifled even the holy lord.

Down he came carrying his sceptor
to restore order and drown the world in his nectar
Lo and behold and he waved his hands
Banished them forever from their lands.

Now we find them crawling out of sight
on our walls scurrying with fright.

Reviews

[R Smith]

poses an interesting theory Prajakta that today's lizards were once rulers of this world and takes us to the next phase, if the holy lord can dispatch them to such a fate how much more will he do to us with our very poor track record, i think for when he arrives it would be a good idea for us now to start learning to crawl on our bellies i doubt we'll have even the luxury of legs, excellent work, very much a modern day fable :)

[prajakta]

Thank you sir

[Prashant Pandey]

I cant think that way, it was really different and interesting. Great work Prajakta. :)

[prajakta]

Thankyou for the read and the review:)..

[Isabel25]

This is incredibly funny :) Sigh! I curse the moment those generals decided to fight. I'm terrified of lizards. Can't stand them at all..!

Brilliant word play Prajakta. Seems like you really have a way with the words.

[prajakta]

Thankyou so much..:)hope it wasnt a problem to you, imagining the lizard war!:)

[Isabel25]

Haha, no.it wasnt :)

[BlueDreams]

A beautiful message been conveyed from your poem :)
Details are so captivating :) Nicely written :)

[prajakta]

thankyou..:)

[BlueDreams]

Anytime welcome :)