What I see..

What nectar is to a dead man,hope is to a dead soul!

Tear stricken faces
wrinkled hands
bruised arms
Is what I see..

Morbid pleasure hunters
physical abuse
sexual harassment
Is what I see..

Souls crumbled to pieces
bodies locked in for desire
ruthless killing
Is what  I see..

This is what I see 
from my mother's womb
this is what I see
in a human's emotional storm

A sense of hope
a longing for freedom
an unquenchable thirst for an identity
Is what I see..

No patriarchs or matriarchs
nor the wars for survival of the fittest
only a world with a an ideology of equality
is what I want to see!

Author's Note

Please give your opinions on the subject!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I support you in your endeavor which gives us hope, justice and equality...Bravo......

[prajakta]

thankyou so much..:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........

[R Smith]

I very much admire the way you have set this poem out and have attacked many problems in today's society, you see the desire among many for hope and freedom but equality is far away, the wars bring ruin to us all, excellent work Prajakta :)

[prajakta]

Thank You for the review sir..:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is great!!!
you cover a wide aspects of society and register some very important truths.......
and a wish in the end on behalf of the whole humanity........
very well written!!!
i loved it!!!
::)

[prajakta]

Thank You so much...:) glad dat you liked it..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..............!!!! :) :)

[Adam W Redmon]

It's really good. I like your use of words! From what I see ;)

[prajakta]

Thanks for the review..:)