A cleansing

"I'll do what your soul craves for"cried she
as the hungry void continued to assault her.
With a prowess of a vehement tigress,she stabbed him saying,
"All it wanted  was this, a cleansing!"

Reviews

[Nabeeha Mustafa]

Powerful (Y) Great work :')

[prajakta]

thankyou.keep reviewing:-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The meaning and intent of yours words gives the reader the impact...yet I would advise to work on the format of this to bring out the fullness that you want to portray to the audience...as is --- this needs a touch-up...

[prajakta]

hmm..ya,i will try to work on it..:)thank you..:)

[E G TEN]

Such powerful words all in all and very well versed,
"With the prowess of a vehement tigress" yes you are..
Thanks for sharing";)

[prajakta]

thankyou for the review.keep reviewing..:)

[Shubham Joshi]

Wow, this is short and yet beautiful poetry. It just says all in four lines.

[prajakta]

thankyou shubham.glad dat u liked it..:)

[Isabel25]

Most of you poems are female oriented. Thats what I like best about your works :D Yet another powerful write Prajakta :D

[prajakta]

thankyou Annie..:)