HOPE

HOPE

A Poem by Prateeksha Khot
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HOPE is a short poem which tells us to never lose faith whatsoever because god always has something planned for us.

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When dreams are shattered,

When you feel all is lost,

Don't feel dejected,

Don't lose hope at any cost.


Life is not a bed of roses,

It has its ups and downs.

We should learn to accept failures,

And not meet them with frowns.


So what if you have not achieved,

What was to be your aim.

There is no need to feel sorry,

There is no need to feel shame.


Man writes his own destiny,

So don't lose hope as yet.

Come on! Buckle up and work harder,

Dont sit there and fret.


If things don't turn out the way you want,

Don't let that spoil your mood,

Because you must remember one thing :

WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD!


© 2010 Prateeksha Khot



Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot
do you agree with this view? How many of you have actually come across such a situation?


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I agree with you completely! The cliche that I've always heard and sadly used myself was "life will never be easy," it speaks for itself. Now on the structure of it, you had a great rhyme scheme of ABCB and then in the last stanza I understand that the content of it was still very poetic and expressive of your emotions. It seems that you knew just what you wanted to say in that last stanza and were excited to write it down; if so, I would advise to write down what first comes to mind and then later go back and try to keep it with the same rhyme scheme. Otherwise, it was a very convincing poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yes, I totally agree with you Prateeksha! Whenever we feel dejected, it is that time when God has planned something better for us and all we have to do is BELIEVE.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Taz
I loved this, it is so empowering and beautiful, It really lifts a person up and makes them have a real need to see the happy that comes out of life and this poem is definately portraying it well, I love how you say life has it's ups and downs because it really does, amazing job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I have!
But then most of us have come across this!
Inspirational as it was ,the more meaning it revoked

Posted 2 Years Ago


Exactly what I needed to read / hear currently. Its strange how the same thing makes more sense in tougher times.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I loved this. Definitely a positive poem.
And it is totally true... :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hi, I'm brand new here and this is the first thing I've read and my first review on Writers Cafe (though I've done lots on Wattpad!) I like this poem, I like your way of thinking, and I like your About Me. I'm not used to this rating and points system, so please forgive me for not knowing what to do. I will be back to read more of your work. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Posted 2 Years Ago


I thought it was great.I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is a poem everyone should keep close, thank you for spreading hope, and for doing it so poetically. Keep writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really like it. It kinda gave me hope to start again. It's really touching. Thank you for writing this :*

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
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Tags: hope, dreams, lost, dejected, life, roses, failure, aim, sorry, shame, destiny, mood, good, remember

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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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