BROTHER , LOVE YOU

BROTHER , LOVE YOU

A Poem by Prateeksha Khot
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This is a poem specially for my brothers..........

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You have loved me as much as one can,

you have always been there for me

when there was no one;

We have fought, we have quarreled,

but let me say, with you

I always had fun.

You shared your secrets with me,

and never betrayed mine;

You have given me so much,

with me you have spent so much of your time.

These lines aren't lifted from anywhere,

they are straight from my heart;

Even if I am given anyone else,

Never with you will I part;

Why ? It's simple :

Where will I find another brother so cool and smart ?

© 2010 Prateeksha Khot



Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot


Well this is for both my brothers !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I always wished I had brother, so I thought this was just the sweetest thing ever.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet. Hope I can see my brother in the same light. What a touching poem that explores one of the purest love there is in this world. I love the thought and dedication.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was really sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats very nice for your brother

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was very sweet Prateeksha

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem. Your brother is so lucky!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish I had such a sister who could write such poems for me

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cho chweet! liked it alot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wish my sister had written such a poem for me

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was soooooo touching!!!1

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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