OH SPRING FEVER !

OH SPRING FEVER !

A Poem by Prateeksha Khot
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This one is for the Spring Fever Senryu contest....... However please note that basically it is a Haiku as it is related to nature

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Restless the Heart is ,

Mind, Twitchy and Jumpy too;

Tell, Spring ! What to do !


© 2010 Prateeksha Khot



Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot
My first Haiku. So don't know how is it.


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Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.

Keep it up, and have a good spring!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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what an innovative way to welcome the spring season !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good pictures. Haiku was good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a haiku. Senryu's focus on humanity or human nature.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was great. congrats on winning

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful and stunning.
I love this write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great use of the Senryu form. Congrats to you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it flows nicely i enjoyed it but didnt catch much meaning or emotion but so few words so its harder for the reader so what is the pattern for a Senryu

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.

Keep it up, and have a good spring!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is always more difficult to convey using lesser number of words. Great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: spring, fever, mind, hear, twitchy, restless, jumpy, do

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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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A happy-go-lucky rebel, i like doing things my way : that is the different way. I am creative and like trying out new stuff : There's hardly anything in which I am not interested. Plus point ? : I HAV.. more..

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