BETRAYAL

BETRAYAL

A Story by Prateeksha Khot
"

Betrayal hurts most when it is from someone you trusted the most

"


















The slowly inching knife
finally made her realize
what Betrayal was .......


© 2010 Prateeksha Khot



Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot
My last for the A 10 Word Story. Please note : When you count words, you are not supposed to include articles. Or atleast that is what our English Professor told us.

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I enjoyed your concise language, it captured the demented beauty of the scene. I love the capitalization of Betrayal, it gives the ending more oomph. Very well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have captured it all. Well written

Vincent

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good ten word story. So well said.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful. and dark.........

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have conyed pretty much in those 10 words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was great. 10 words and so much told in them. Best of luck for the contest.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

... i cant count, but i think there are 11 words.. or is just a 10 word story symbolic? anyways, i get it.. sad...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on April 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 14, 2010
Tags: Betrayal, hurt, kill, knife, trust, someone, love, hate

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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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