Magic!

Magic!

A Poem by PP
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*Magic*

"
Child's fantasy,
Lovers' imagination,
Everyone's longing,
of unrealistic interventions.
A shot of adrenaline
creates;
Chills down the spine,
Goosebumps all over,
Impatient anticipation
Conflicting apprehensions;
Of the unseen and unknown.
When that magician
Raises a glossy curtain
Waives his magic wand
To muddle with existing notions,
That's when the magic happens
In some far fantasy land
In a mystic corner.

© 2014 PP


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and that corner is somewhere we often cannot get to ...

they remain unseen and unknown...

reality is always so different from fantasy..

i like the first several lines a lot

wondering if you want "lovers'"
to be plural..when the other two "child's" and
everyone's are singular.

but regardless, this is a catchy piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for your very kind words :) I wanted to keep the lovers plural, but never noticed th.. read more



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Magic happens when the curtains get lifted in a faraway corner of our mind! You brought it out superbly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Divya, the magic is about to happen!!
i like it :)
fantasy is another world , another dimension , where all our dreams come true

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

sure i did ^_^ you are good ..
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

:)
I like how you identify the moment in which the magic happens. I also like how the lines before that hint at some of the reasons we wish for magic. I think you also captured what the sensation of waiting for that magic feels like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Christian, hope you've been touched by magic this morning!
and that corner is somewhere we often cannot get to ...

they remain unseen and unknown...

reality is always so different from fantasy..

i like the first several lines a lot

wondering if you want "lovers'"
to be plural..when the other two "child's" and
everyone's are singular.

but regardless, this is a catchy piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for your very kind words :) I wanted to keep the lovers plural, but never noticed th.. read more

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Added on December 26, 2012
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Leeds, United Kingdom



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