Heaven's Gate

Heaven's Gate

A Poem by PP
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Pleasure's Captive..

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Love with ease 
Master the art 
Blend your instincts 
With passion from your heart 
A pinch of bliss 
restore it; inch by inch 
Smell a million fragrance 
Involve in the divine indulgence 
Empty your soul 
In the laps of love 
In eternity's cuddle 
Fire the immortal torch 
Say nothing, not a word 
Listen to the resonance of your art
all around 
Echoes coming back and forth 
of passion waves and their reflections
from the walls of your lovers heart
Feel the vibrations 
Feel the attraction 
Magnetize 
In a forever interlock 
Surrender effortlessly 
You are now pleasure's captive 
There is no turning back
you have found the heaven's gate..

© 2014 PP


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Namaste, poetic paradise.. the pathway to heaven carved out by your words. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very creative, eloquent, and with a unique perspective for defining the credentials that are necessary for finding and make it through Heaven's Gate. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery in this piece. I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


very sweet to make love as superior as devine heaven. i liked the similarity. since love is not only the love between man and woman, love includes God's love, love to parents, kids, people, the good...then, nothing can be ever as superior as it..
i have really enjoyed reading this poem..
thank you for sharing..

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Khalid for taking this poem to a whole new level, I truly admire your concept of universal.. read more
khalid

11 Years Ago

you are always welcome..
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
This is a fine poem , that impresses with imagery, like heaven`s gate, or the very strong imagery of the last lines, very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie:)
i see this as making the most of love...feeling it, not steering it...same as with the muse...just feel it and write it...don't try to control it...

if we control our feelings of love, we never quite feel what we could.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Absolutely, thank you Jacob :)
A very splendid art

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
A beautiful description of releasing fear and falling into desire and passion. I like how you described a emotion of release and opening of new doors with gentleness and wisdom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
this flows with the essence of love and desire..quite remarkable

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dr. Wood :)
This has captured my heart...flows right to bliss! Such lovely thoughts with gay abandon, such is love, yes, you nailed it. Smart cookie you are. No turning back, since I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you darling..and yes there is NO turning back lol :)

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