DAD

DAD

A Poem by pratik


I know, dad, that you are the one,
          Who covers me with blanket when I am asleep.

I know, dad, that you are the one,
          Who applies band-aid to me when I am hurt.

I know, dad, that you are the one,
          Who gifts me with happiness when I am sad.

I know, dad, that you are the one,
         Who cooks a meal for me when I am hungry.

I know, dad, that you are trying your best,
                     So that I don't feel the absence of mom...

And dad, I love you for that,
  Whatever the situation, I promise, that we will forever be together...


© 2015 pratik



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Very heart touching. I can feel your emotions and can relate to this one. Beautifully written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sometimes dad does not know that he is appreciated. My dad is running until he is tired because of us kids. Nice poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This one is a sweet ode to a great man. Hats off and huge respect to your Dad. You be good and make him proud buddy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love it
What a beautiful poem
i know Dad takes all the pressure
he is gorgeous

love this

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is a lovely and beautiful piece um sure ur dad is very proud o you..


well done:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful tribute to your dad! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful ode to your father, Pratik. Well done. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very well dedicated Pratik. Never let your dad feel lonely or leave him when he needs you. God bless you. :) Parents are truly rockstars.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A fine tribute to your Father Pratik, every line is filled with the love and caring of a Father for his son and the love returned from son to Father and yes a love to last forever, beautiful work my friend :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


pratik

2 Years Ago

Thank you sir.
This brings back some memories of my Dad. It is a very good tribute. Keep up the good work.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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