The TIE..

There's something bothering in my mind

Because there's No.1 and No.2 that I found,
I started wandering and thinking 
But I always ended up with much more reasoning....


Once I felt deep appreciation for No.1,
a feeling I haven't expressed for a long time
He showed me love can make a way
cause he makes me jolly everyday.


To him I'am always fond
cause he always understands
that made him the best 
and I tell you, you don't have to test!


Here comes my No.2
he makes me happy always, that's true.
together we sing songs
to my dream boy that's what I long.


No.2 is my seat mate
I hope he's also my soul mate
because he completes my day
whatever comes in the way.


Now I'll ask you,
No.1 or No. 2,
cause that's a big question for me too,
who will I choose between the two?


Both of them made me confused
But I will never make it obvious
cause they both make me smile
and in my heart I'll give them a TIE...

Reviews

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

:) very witty? Is English your first language? I detected a few phrases here and there you struggled with, but overall a cute poem, the message is cheeky and the title is good....great work. keep at it!

[Art]

decisions...to choose or decide ...this is a dilema...you have the choice between two persons that surely touch your heart...

nice work...