Temper Tantrum

I slam the door with all my might,

but the sound comes out as a FWUPH, not right!

the sound is supposed to be

a SMACK to show that I'm angry!

I look to see what's in the door

and see a coat is on the floor

I pick it up, still full of anger

and put it back up on a hanger.

I try to slam the door again

but the results are still the same!

I find a shoe shoved in the crack,

pick it up, and throw it back.

over, and over, I try to slam,

but something gets caught and makes it jam!

I push the item into an empty space

but something else just fills its place.

suddenly, my fury starts to change!

like pouring water on the flames!

I release the door, and just step back,

And then, Amazingly, I LAUGH!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I enjoyed reading the poem. I'm not like you though. I would have kicked the door hard the second time to make me feel better. lol I like the laughing part at the end. I have had days like that many times. You did a great job on this poem and I love the style and flow of it as well.

[Yina]

Haha that is amazing! I love the way you finally just found it funny:) That's an awesome writing there:)

[Luzmar]

It is a good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

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. haha! ... awesome scene ... this is brilliantly written ...

[Anicca]

I love this piece. It's quirky! Nice write, you suceeded in making me laugh which happens less and less nowadays, thankyou!

[bookworm]

lol I'm no poet but i loved this

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like the rhythm and flow with humor
Great piece. Mauricio

[Mortricia]

I like this! You build up the rage and end on a positive note. Very cool.

[kaylyn]

this is a very cute poem

[Cricket Kidd]

this is based on a real tantrum i watched my 13 year old sister throw. It was hilarious. hope you enjoy. ;D