feelings:)

Feeling the pain of life,feeling the rain side by side...

Feelings are a part of you since birth..

a baby learns by the feeling of touch,what’s hot and what’s cold..

As age comes everybody learns..

Cause learning is a process,which is never ending.. 

we learn what’s happiness what’s sadness..

Learn the value of emotions the fact that, not always emotions are valued..

Cause the innocence of a child is cause he knows nothing..

And with time we all lose the thing which is the charm of a child and a kid, 'innocence' the cuteness the unawareness and the innocent happiness.....

We lose it all...

we see life we realize things, 

we see and feel the pain we sense that actually there is nothing like happiness its jus the pursuit of happiness.....

Its what we feel is nice o brings a smile it is happiness,

it might be something small and stupid but its happiness..

We see that living life is actually learning and fighting every now and then 

its learning and its all bout feeling the awesome things given by god to us.....

Its the lovely sun rise, the red morning sky, 

the sweet breeze of nature,the lovely flowers of nature ,

the smile on a Childs face,the happiness of people around, 

the lovely day light and clean bright sky,

the thoughts of young minds, the love and care around, 

the warmth of hug, the peck on cheek, 

the lovely warmth of motherly love, the care of a father, 

the fun n joy with friends and completeness which you feel within..

perfect yet not so flawless things of life, 

the rain falling on the ground,the smell of wet mud ,

the sense of happiness in and around, 

the feeling of oneness among family and friends,the brightness on morning faces ,

the nit bright sky with stars glooming all time,the cold breeze of nit....

the immense amount of loveliness and accurate amount of goodness given by god to us..

which humans forget in the fast and speedy life of theirs...

lets cherish the love the happiness around,the element of care,

the feeling and happiness of bringing a smile on a face,

the feeling of help for the needy,and live are lives in a fruitful and sometimes impractical way....

light the lamp of happiness and spread smiles....:)

 

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

very good ideas...but instead of..saying it..And with time we all lose the thing which is the charm of a child and a kid, 'innocence' the cuteness the unawareness and the innocent happiness.....

We lose it all...

we see life we realize things,

we see and feel the pain we sense that actually there is nothing like happiness its jus the pursuit of happiness.....

Its what we feel is nice o brings a smile it is happiness,

it might be something small and stupid but its happiness..

We see that living life is actually learning and fighting every now and then

its learning and its all bout feeling the awesome things given by god to us.....
try using a metaphor that means it...really good starts here.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful write with breaking all the barriers this is a flow of all....... nice to share..

[GridLok]

The expressionof your evident warm-heartedness will benefit from careful 'listening to what you have written'. Try reading aloud to someone or, even better ask them to read your work back to you.

[Dove]

This is a really nice piece and i like the message in it, great job!

[Dayran]

A poem that flows like the ganga from the locks of Siva. A beautiful representation of the ages of life. Your garden must have bloomed again, in poetry.

[alegria]

thanku:) this ma fav..i agree not written in a pattern tho..:( but thanku for ur inputs:)

[Clever Forever]

This is really good, but it has no formatting..?
Other than that, I like the message and the way its written (: