'A Tough Bay..'
A Poem by
Priyankaabhilaashi
... "You hold my heart on a rough day..You chose my breath on a tough bay.. How could you stake your precious pearl.. I was simply, a torn-off bruised worthless ray..!!" ...
© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
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Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simple and well said...love the photo accompanying it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simple and well said...love the photo accompanying it.
Thank you Ms. Sarah..!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Thank you Ms. Sarah..!!!
You are always so unique in your writing great write!
Posted 12 Years Ago
You are always so unique in your writing great write!
Thank you stars are far..!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Thank you stars are far..!!
it shows the trust
and a real nice meanings it gave :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
it shows the trust
and a real nice meanings it gave :)
Thank you Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!
trust and loss age old feelings so simply stated
Posted 13 Years Ago
trust and loss age old feelings so simply stated
Thank you Ostensible Truth..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Ostensible Truth..!!!
short but well written indeed!! I like the "how could you stake your precious pearl" - nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
short but well written indeed!! I like the "how could you stake your precious pearl" - nice!
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Added on February 26, 2011
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Priyankaabhilaashi Jaipur, India
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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
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