'A Tough Bay..'

'A Tough Bay..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi

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"You hold my heart on a rough day..
You chose my breath on a tough bay..
How could you stake your precious pearl..
I was simply, a torn-off bruised worthless ray..!!"

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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and well said...love the photo accompanying it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Sarah..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are always so unique in your writing great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you stars are far..!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


it shows the trust
and a real nice meanings it gave :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


trust and loss age old feelings so simply stated

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Ostensible Truth..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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short but well written indeed!! I like the "how could you stake your precious pearl" - nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2011
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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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