'Deepest grain..'

For someone who was my soul for ages! As the world has changed..i have decided to move ahead towards my Dream..!!Thanks a zillion tons for making me what i am today..!!!Thank you for pushing me away!

...

"You walked past my heart..

Ripping my soul apart..

Placed you at the highest cadre..

You crushed emotional ladder..

What did you gain through this..

The silliest of me will surely miss..

Deepest grain of the core..

Will shed the memories more..

I am happy you left..

No one will dare theft..

Thank you, for you made me strong..

Will mold, so nothing seems wrong..!!!!"

...

20th July, 2011

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Sri Daran..!!!

[Dayran]

Good for you!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. sarah..!!!

[sarah]

This is very strong and it is true people come into our lives and hurt us but when they leave we are stronger people in the end. Great write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you CyndiR..!!!!

[CyndiR]

I love the power of this poem! The ending is very strong and emotions are deep inside this poem. A very straight forward poem with raw power! A short, clear power, a very nice written!
~CyndiR

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. imagination101..!!!!

[imagination101]

Written with feelings and emotions!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime anger replace sadness. Sometime better to be thankful and move on. Life had many new roads for us. I like the honest and direct words in this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Thrinna Mae..!!!!