What am I feeling?

What am I feeling?

A Poem by prodicallife

What am I feeling now?

Just a tempering bulge of volcano.

The red, dark orange

Melting charcoal heart

Dripping pain from it

Still sticking to some parts of body.


I am curbed in a spider web

A black death smelling cave.

I am half dead asleep

Wih each inch of my flesh

Dripping my scream out

As I cannot shout anymore


Bit by bit life comes backs

Heap by heap pain raises

Drip by drip tears fall out

And moment by moment I fall back asleep.


A moment switching between the battle

Of life and death

One wins, the other fights back

The fun they are really enjoying

I am trenched in between them both.


A flick opens my eyes.

The dark endless charcoal walls at all ends

No hand pulling me towards

That little light.

No breath pumping me

Through the living world.


I am sweating

I can feel the wet cool

Tshirt over my chest

A t-shirt which is calling me naked from most parts.


I can smell the rotten flesh

A little drip falls on my eyes

And it opens immediately

To look up at anything that can help


It’s not the sweat

A white color T-shirt

That has now changed to red

A bunch of beasts jumping to get hold of me

Maybe, I could be a delicious treat


A moment again and the screeching voices

Of hungry demons is gone

Thanks a lot dear lord

Although I am dead for million counts .

But, now it feels great to die again.



© 2014 prodicallife

Author's Note

Just a random, dark, horror, dream.

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It seems you are stuck in a loop of night terrors and every time you die, you welcome that death with peace and calm.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Sounds like a horrific nightmare, life can be that way some days. Enjoyed your dark side of the moon, nicely pen'd.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Frieda,

I feel so welcoming seeing you on my wall.

I have a smile on .. read more
That was a good poem! You had a slight spelling mistake though, you forgot the T in with. Great work otherwise!

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Writer,

Thanks for reviewing my work with those appreciating words.

Y.. read more

4 Years Ago

My pleasure!
A wild dream. The dreams are the highway to real life. This dream mean struggle and decisions to be made. I like the description leading to the powerful ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Coyote,

Thanks for Reviewing it with so appreciating words.

I am much.. read more
This is spooky. It feels dream-like which I enjoy. I believe dreams are extremely powerful, and yours left me frightened. It felt endless. Is this recurring? Brilliant write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Quirklet,

Thanks for reviewing my work so wonderfully.

I am honored t.. read more
well....you conveyed so much....thanks for sharing!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Sandeep,

Firstly, welcome to my wall. I hope you enjoyed a walk around my wall.read more
This is scary. Your choice of words and composition is great. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Hahahahahahaha 😄

Dear Praveeta,

That was the aim of my write.
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4 Years Ago

And you have succeeded :)
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Awesome! It just has so much strength and depth that just gives me the chills! It's amazing! It literally scared me the way you could explain such emptiness and horror!
Well done, friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Just

Thanks a lot for that appreciating review of your.

It feels grea.. read more
Vicious cycle here...dark and unsettling but not without insight and some light left remaining, a process one is accepting of...within such darkness, there are doorways, enough to find the sunshine again, beautifully woven x

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Dear Poppy

Thanks a lot for your appreciating words.

Stay blessed😊
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Added on January 4, 2014
Last Updated on January 4, 2014



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