Your Aura of Miracles

Enjoy your youth

Your form has a mass of questions

Procreation, attachment, sensual release

You have ridden to death on a hundred Pegasi

 

For the thrill, for the journey?

Until you are no longer young

 

There’s less and less love, to go around

Have you noticed, we are getting older!

Your beauty has a back number

 

Wait in line, behind the younger woman

Your assets are a declining stock

 

You have less and less daring

To put your heart on the line

So much for your bourgeois vitality

 

Your manipulation of immorality

I’m not sure you will have descendents after all

 

What is the point of being beautiful

If it is not a ticket to immortality?

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

Our society has a perturbed vision of beauty, that one must be young. So give us makeup, Botox, the rest. But beauty for me means someone I want to look at, and this is a feelIng that has nothing to do with exterior looks but interior attractive qualities that make you want to be around someone.

[Prolific In Verse]

But how to perceive inner beauty?

[Marie]

You have a point--but beauty isn't necessarily youth.

[Prolific In Verse]

I can see how you don't know what to say, but since you have reviewd me 500 times, I wonder how or why you say that.

[Marie]

I thought I knew what point you were paking, but apparently I did not. All I meant was that youth does not necessarily equal beauty and vice versa. And outward beauty isn't all that much either. Although it certainly seems like it some times.

[Angelic_Dreamer]

I loved this this is actually the first piece of writing that I've read by u and I really like it. I'll be checking out more of ur writing later on in the days:)

[Prolific In Verse]

That is always encouraging.

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Thanks I truely thought this was a very absorbing and was so worth a few mintues of my time(no sarcasim or anything)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

lol I noticed younger has a link to some anti-aging product/??

writer's cafe is not far beyond Facebook I see....

God help me the internet is corrupt.

[Prolific In Verse]

It's just hard to accept the truth, when the marketplace for female worth is run by men. [this is a provocative piece, your comments better be good]