Blew My Mind

Wrote This On A Random Day

I Stole Your Heart And You Stole Mine, And It Blew My Mind, When I Saw Your Face, You Made My Heartbeat Race, Right Then And There, All I Could Do Was Stare, I Knew It From The Start, That You Would Steal My Heart, It Came Without Showing, It Happened Without Knowing, Why Take  When You Can Give, Why Die When You Can Live, Your Like The Stars In The Night, Because You Shine So Bright, Lets Be Together, Always And Forever, Its Hard To Show My Feelings, Its Easy To Find The Meanings, Would You Miss Me If I Died, Would You Kiss Me If I Cried, Why Cant You See, That This Is Hard For Me, Even When I Try, It Still Makes You Cry, It Seems All Fake, Its More Than I Can Take, I Cant Take It Anymore, So Lets Walk Out That Door, Lets Start Something New, So Its Just Me And You, It Still Blew My Bind, That I Stole Your Heart And You Stole Mine

Author's Note

Randomly Wrote This, How Is It

Reviews

[racyvanillapixie]

for a random writing, pure excellentness! I envy your talent!

[Jessica]

One thing that I really like to see is a guy that's my age that isn't afraid to write poetry this heartfelt and sweet. I loved reading this and feeling the emotions. I know how you feel and I can relate to it. Wonderful, keep writing :)

[Mzsolitude]

nice

[Practically Enchanted]

I thought it was nicely written. Very heartfelt. I did notice the last line a small typo on your stole mine. I think you meant you stole mine. I am new to this sight so I will refrain from rating b/c I don't understand it yet.