Dear Angel,

Old write, hope you like :)

Dear Angel,

 

I ask of you to give me peace and show me my way,

 

I ask of you to give me life a life I can and will love,

 

I ask of you to give me reason a reason that really counts,

 

I ask of you to bless the good and bad,

 

I ask of you to keep me going to keep me on my path,

 

I ask of you to show me gratitude to all I have ever sinned,

 

I ask of you to bless my life family and my friends,

 

I ask of you to bless my heart and watch over me,

 

I ask of you a lot but all I really wanted was a blessing from you,

 

Love,

~Me~

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

This is good!!

[Sometimes Blood]

This is crap. Beginning each sentence with "I" ruins it for me

[Regrets]

I love this :) thanks for sharing !!!

[☮Lizzie❤]

Love it. very well done.

[Jordan's Back]

Very nice work

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice, selfless wishes...

lovely write!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

We all in one way or another ask for too much from those above. But they seem to know what is best for us, and sees fit that we learn some valuable lessons in the meantime. They can't run our lives for us, but they are always there to guide us through and protect us from harm. Beautiful tender piece. Nicely done.

~Anna Rose

[AK]

That was really well written!

[Eleanor]

I really enjoyed this..Great job
-Eleanor

[Carrie Manor]

Aww! This is a very tender write! I really like it keep up! :) The third, fourth, and seventh lines were my favorite.