Losin' It

Losin' It

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
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I apologize if you find this gruesome or sick. It was really written in a rage and I hope you don’t find it a problem. LOL I am not as crazy as this poem makes me sound.

 

You may not beleive it when I say

You mean nothing to me but you also my everything

Im a good girl gunna stay that way

The things that run through my mind could taint a god

The beauty in death makes me want to kill

I love and I hate you

You will always be in my soul but burned in my mind

I have gone crazy in hate an love

My life is altered and shifting away from the light into the forest to my right

The words falling from my mouth only words, the silly thing

But if you could reach into my mind you would go insane

The smiles that appear on my face are of the thoughts of your death at my hand

But I think I will spare you is this love just that strong

I want you dead

But be mine please I beg of you

But as you sleep my thoughts will run wild of slitting your throut and claming whats mine...

Your heart.

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


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AK
Beautiful poem! Polished choice of words! Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmm
This has a poetic feel to it when read aloud,
I really enjoyed the depth of this write...awesome...100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


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My name is Patricia I am 17 years old and a proud mother of a 2 year old lil girl. I love my daughter with all my heart more..

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