the
palzak charkranoids are one of the most ancient charkranoid clans.
malka elkai melzak is the leader of the palzak charkranoids. malka is
one of the only survivors of the ancient palzak charkranoid. the
palzak are one of the few clans that appear human. charkranoids are
created one of three ways. The first way is to be born as a
charkranoid,the second way is to overflow your core (a core is your
source of energy and life force), the third way is to have your core
eaten by a charkranoids and be rapidly replaced by a charkranoids
core. charkranoids are feared by there power's, intelligence and
mastery of techniques. when a charkranoid is born he/she is human.
The doctor must suppress the baby's energy or they will die. the
palzak charkranoids are different
a palzak is born there energy is suppressed
by the
baby's
mind.
when a palzak is about ten years old there energy increases rapidly
that is when the palzak is in danger of dying and there energy must
be suppressed.
malka has always been a outcast because he is a reborn spirit of the
ancient palzak leader. when he became the clan leader he keep
separate
from the main camp. he started working for the charkranoid hunters to
assassinate any rough charkranoids but he denied any missions that
involved killing innocent charkranoids. on one mission to kill a
rough charkranoid that had killed countless humans. in the middle of
the mission the came close to his old clans camp. after the arrived
near there camp there was a earthquake that malka said it was caused
by energy. the user of the earthquake was a rough hunter. then
melkast elsak palzak came from underground he told malka that the
rough hunter had killed three of the palzak clan. this lead malka to
turn the rough hunter into a palzak charkranoid. after a few days he
accepts that he is a charkranoid and becomes friends with malka. when
the village is attacked malka and pelkast fought their way to the
edge of the village. pelkast got overwhelmed and eventually got
stabbed in his core. malka gave his core to pelkast to save his life
but with no core you die. he used his most powerful charkranoid form.
he used his energy to increase his speed and all other physical
traits. malka had only eaten two cores before this event. with his
increased speed and physical traits he ripped out 16 cores and eats
them to stay alive longer. when a charkranoid eats a core there
energy and life force doubles. malka then combined 18 more cores into
a more powerful one he was about to eat the core but pelkast said to
replace his core with the cores he combined. after three years of
rest a hunter showed up on the surface near the camp. He accused the
palzak's of a attack that happened recently in the hunters base.
their was a note left by the attacker malka looked at it and said it
was ancient palzak.
This is a good read, action and sadness. The ending was a bit a cliff hanger, maybe part two would suit my wants? (pleeeeease) thanks, enjoyed this. Do you play Magic; the gathering? You seem like the person to. I love magic. And yu-gi-oh! And pokemon, and other anime stuff. The death note, naruto, avatar, so forth and so forth. #team rocket. I had to say that...
This is a good read, action and sadness. The ending was a bit a cliff hanger, maybe part two would suit my wants? (pleeeeease) thanks, enjoyed this. Do you play Magic; the gathering? You seem like the person to. I love magic. And yu-gi-oh! And pokemon, and other anime stuff. The death note, naruto, avatar, so forth and so forth. #team rocket. I had to say that...
Prymore, I really enjoyed your story & look forward to hearing more about these characters! You are very creative & I am curious to see what happens next!
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thanks for the review i will continue on this in the future,i will be posting a story of the first c.. read morethanks for the review i will continue on this in the future,i will be posting a story of the first character i created soon.
Prymore! I did not know that you had all that in you! I hope that it is just the beginning! I will be very interested to hear more about these characters and any others that you will write about!
Prymore, I think your story is great, it has action and very imaginative. The only thing I noticed was you didn't really explain about after the village was attacked, you know you told about the two characters and then went to three years later but what happened to the village during that attack ? But like I said I think it is very good writing and I look forward to reading more of your stories ! thanks for posting.
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