Whose Line Is It Anyway?

There's a special bucket in pergatory.

And it ain't for fried chicken.

It holds all the pieces that don't belong.

Some are the missing.

Some are extra.

But they don't fit.

Won't fit.

Can't fit.

Shouldn't fit.

Not in this life anyway.

At least not in a way that is accepted.

They have rough edges.

Crooked corners.

Frayed fantasies.

Fit no mold.

Conform to no constructs.

They live where others dare not.

Dwelling in darkness.

With a hint of light when the cover is lifted.

One foot dangling in reality.

The other planted firmly in the clouds.

Tossed about by wisps of emotions like confetti.

Free spirits no one understands.

Their hearts beat differently.

Their words flow freely.

While everyone else clutches lies.

They release truth.

A complex network of frightful integrity and vision beyond the surface.

Uninhibited emotions run deep and wide.

Like a bottomless river.

Magic wands wielded like majorettes twirling batons.

They march to a different drummer.

Flail about in a breathtaking break dance.

Spinning on their heads for infinity and never falling over.

Whirling dervishes.

Never aligning.

Not walking the line.

They are fine.

With beautiful minds.

You can suck the life from them.

But can never have their souls.

No, they do not walk the line.

But then again ...

... whose line is it anyway?

Reviews

[Hebe]

Pete, this took my breath away, I keep thinking this is your best yet... then I read this, what a unique concept ....I got this visual of all these wonderful souls hanging out, finally finding acceptance and peace, this was a great tribute to everyone who took the 'The Road Less Travelled' path! I loved the last line it's perfect (used to watch that show Lol!) Stunning piece of writing!

[Pete]

thanks Hebe. i don't have to write descriptions of my writes because you do it for me with your kind, thoughtful reviews. i couldn't have explained it better myself. yes, i used to watch that show too! :)

[Shannon]

Wow. Why does everyone have to fit? Eloquently stated.

[Pete]

yup, square pegs don't fit in round holes and aren't supposed to. thank you Shannon.

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Wow, this is so powerful. It's to subtle to say I relate, this is engraved deep within. The words flow elegantly but are so strong. The message I find amusing and liberating. Great piece. Thank you for sharing God Bless

Sheer Terror

[Giulia King]

All your poems are amazing! The way you write is truly amazing, Pete.

[Pete]

what a kind, sweet thing to say Gullia! i appreciate your writes too and i thank you for your friendship here in the cafe. :)

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in every line of this well written poem. While the last line was unexpected, it is perfect. It is a pleasure to read your poetry :) Julie

[Pete]

what a nice thing to say Julie. the feeling is mutual. thank you :)

[Isabella Ivy]

I appreciate this! :) I.I.

[Pete]

thanks I.I. and i appreciate you stopping by and reviewing! :)

[Isabella Ivy]

You're most welcome, Pete!