I Don't Care

I Don't Care

A Poem by Pete


The world lies outside my door.
For sale.
Discounted.
Cold.
Heartless.
Broken.
Perverse.
Bankrupt.
Unfair.
Unpredictable.
Directionless.
Wobbling on a crooked, evil axis.
Gravitationally egregious.
Down, up, then back down again.
Like a kite twisting in the wind.
Flown purely for survival and gain.
Jimmy crack corn and ...
... I don't care ...

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© 2017 Pete



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It gets hard to care when the world seems so cold and barren of empathy. The corruption waxes hourly and the effects affect one and all. This really reminds me Pete of why I sometimes just want to remain in bed for the day but we can't and we know it for the world needs our light each one of us brings knowingly or unknowingly. Great piece :)

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Pete

2 Months Ago

amen. thank you P.R.S. appreciated ...



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It gets hard to care when the world seems so cold and barren of empathy. The corruption waxes hourly and the effects affect one and all. This really reminds me Pete of why I sometimes just want to remain in bed for the day but we can't and we know it for the world needs our light each one of us brings knowingly or unknowingly. Great piece :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

amen. thank you P.R.S. appreciated ...
Love it, so relatable and yep sometimes we don't care, sometimes for evermore lol. Today I don't care! ha! Love the imagery Pete

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

thanks for taking the time andrew. best ...

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