Too Far

Crossed Line

Entwined

Your Body

And Mine

Soft Sighs

Shaking Thighs

Heavy Breath

Dirty Lie

Blame Drinks

Dont Think

Sinning Hearts

In Sync

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kyle]

Nicely done in just a few short words!

[creativequill]

love the short lines, less words is sometimes better,

Blame drinks
don't thnk
sinning hearts
in sync

absolutely great!!

[Joanna Johnson]

Interesting. Short, but graphic....great imagery

[Brandon]

A lot said in very few words. Very nicely done.

[Kirby Inc.]

A lot of emotion in a few words... very powerful. The rhyming was also quite enjoyable!
To produce such clear, emotional pictures in so few words... amazing...

[JB Murray]

Fantastic, and nostalgic images conjured with so few words... very nice write!

[Tim]

I've had nights like this. haha Not anymore though. Nice poem, with a lot of punch in a few words.

[Jen]

I like the style of this poem... Short, blunt, to the point, but with a rhyme scheme.
I tend to be a fan of just about anything that rhymes :P

[Reform69]

this was a good read, flowed well and the imagery was expressed well =) good read

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the gentle flow of desire in the poem. Good poetry like this one can open the imagination with gentle words leading to a passionate ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote