Taken

you kissed me
made me want to die
you held me
but I couldn’t cry
you took me
and I went astray
you hurt me
you won’t go away

Reviews

[April Child]

you hurt me
you won't go away

Although short, this piece packs a punch and certainly does not lack depth. In fact those final lines are still echoing in my head. Very nice.

[OPEN AND EXPOSED]

simple...but to the point....nice...

[Anita B Jacques]

Wow. Very serious stuff here very painful and full of emotions.Very good write. With only a few word you said muchThank for sharing. God bless you.

Anita