first love

First Love

 

 

I couldn't believe it,

he had said the words,

and typed the words,

All I could do was sit there,

frozen,

like a statue in a snow storm,

my body grew numb,

what do I say?,

What do I do?,

Do I love him back?,

Is any of this true?

I could only think of one thing to do,

I walked.

I walked to him,

I stood in front of him,

I pulled him to me,

And I said,

"I love you too.''

Reviews

[Rawr!!XD]

I know how this feels.....I can relate so well it scares me lolz. This is amazing......truely and completely amazing. Great job!

[A.Lee]

This is really sweet. Simple in words and nature, but it leaves you with a good feeling. The innocence of your first love. Nice write.

[James Watts]

Nice. Short and to the point. A well written poem of love. Nice work.

[Mauricio Montoya]

First Love from the heart great piece comes together beautify.
Good job well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Someone life is fair. Love will meet us half way. A beautiful poem with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Huggy Bear]

The power of love is easy to talk about but hard to write about. You do a fantastic job in this poem.

[larryb]

Good work :)

[Dutch Jr.]

Nice, simple poem here. I like.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was adorable. :)
It was cute in my opinion.
Thanks for sharing. :)

[rockinmiley555]

awwwww! this is so cute! i usually dont like free verse poems bc i like rhyming poems haha but i love this! its so simple but powerful