Un-wanted

Un-wanted

A Poem by LynLee

Un- wanted

 

I never asked for this.

I said something completely,

different.

You take the words and make something,

Un- wanted.

 

I never meant,

for your heart to see,

how much a mess-up,

I can be.

I told her the truth,

yet she took it for granted.

 

I sit here thinking,

"What will I do?,

"What will happen?",

I know I can't break your heart again.

I know that you think this love is true.

 

Yet it isn't.

My heart feels black.

I regret my best friend.

Yet a big hole in my heart,

is still reserved for her.

 

But the thing that can't measure,

any of this,

is,

the fact that you feel it too.

I know that in your heart,

and in your mind.

You know this wasn't meant to be.

Yet you make it last longer,

day by day,

month by month.

Soon,

year by year.

 

I can't see my future.

When I do,

I only see your face.

And so I write you this letter,

to reveal my fate.

 

 

 

 

© 2010 LynLee


Author's Note

LynLee
this is truly not a good piece, but is trully coming from so many emotions in me.

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in a way, it makes me think of a friendship you never wanted to start...though maybe its just about a boy. but if not, i appreciate it still, because, well, who writes poems about mistaken friendships? i like it, whether its a romantic or friendship poem. waqy to express the emotions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


to have Emotions is the best to make a piece of write work well! With out a heart and feelings most of the time it tells nothing to others...
I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh! truly amazing write! It touched me so much, I can't express! Thanks LynLee! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I disagree. I think this is an excellent piece. Partially because of the flood of emotions that can be felt through it. Good work. One of my favorites actually.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a great write. I loved it turly. nice poem (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I do not agree with you at all this is a good poem and with just a few tweeks A great poem. YOu flow for the most part is great a few shaky parts and you go off beat but here it is the off beat make thios in a way. never put your own work down if you would like some sugestions let me know and i will give them to you but really you do have a Good piece here! B.P.

Posted 13 Years Ago


raw and emotional, surely spare of the moment, and that's exacly what it feels like, a tearing of the heart, great job on form and function of line breaks.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hola, me llamo LynLee. De donde es Earth. Me cumpleanos es Noviembre 24. Me gusta es escribir. Sorry had to practice my spanish somewhere. I'm LynLee. I'm fourteen and I am a writer. My best frien.. more..

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