Pain

Pain

A Poem by Amber

All this pain within me
It never seems to leave
I've given all I can give
Now there's nothing left of me

God please help me
I can't live like this anymore
I've become too weak
Now I've fallen to the floor

I'm begging on my knees
Please take away this pain
I'm continuing to get weak
I think I'm starting to go insane

I will hold my head up high
Until I become strong again
I feel like I'm going to die
But my heart I know you will mend


© 2012 Amber



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Amber
ignore grammar, tell me if it sucks

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Lovely poem full of sadness. Wonderful writing Amber.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amber

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. That's how I feel sometimes, you know? But thank you for the review! :)
it doesn't suck i like it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I really like this. I like the way it starts out in dispair and sadness and ends with hope. Very nice write. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
}Echo{

4 Years Ago

You're Welcome. :)
I like this poem. It's inspiring the way you start the poem with a since of despair and end on a hopeful note. Great poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I full of hope. I know that no matter what happens God will help me get through. Thank yo.. read more
Amber

4 Years Ago

I'm*
MystiqFairy

4 Years Ago

Your welcome! Thanks for posting it!
powerful and beautiful! love u!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Love you too! :)

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Added on December 14, 2012
Last Updated on December 14, 2012
Tags: poem, sad, hopeful

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Amber
Amber

Los Angeles, CA



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My name is Amber and I love writing poems, or stories. I know I'm not the best, but when I write I use the emotion I feel. more..

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