Love Unknown.

Love Unknown.

A Poem by Amber
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I know it's not but it helped me get out stress.

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Would you like to know a secret?
It's a secret I can't deny,
I don't know what to do,
But I know i'm living a lie.

It's something I don't want anyone to know,
It's really very bad you see,
I will never let this secret show,
Just know it's something that I need.

I can't keep living this way,
It's killing me you see,
But I know I can never say,
What you mean to me.

So I go on with this pathetic life,
Hoping things may one day change,
I keep sitting here using this knife,
And now I'll never be the same.

© 2009 Amber


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I know when I write it helps me express and feel better often! I can understand that!! Well written! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I wrote this when I was 13 years old. :)
DalainaRenee

11 Years Ago

Wow that is really wonderful! I started writing young as well! Keep it up!
Amber

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
I love this, i can relate with this situation.

thanks for reading my poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's tragic, yet written so well. Beautiful flow and you can feel the emotion in it.
Loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! That was intense. Hurting oneself is a tough subject to write on, yet you did this so well.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Amber
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Los Angeles, CA



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My name is Amber and I love writing poems, or stories. I know I'm not the best, but when I write I use the emotion I feel. more..

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