Too late

Too late

A Poem by qaralynn

I'm walking through these empty halls
filled with memories of you
surrounded by a silent darkness
your feelings break through

And I feel your pain
I feel your tears stream down on my face
but it's too late

You're gone now

© 2010 qaralynn


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i am in love with this. very nice and powerful write!(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


gone...


good writing


Rossen

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but powerful. This is a perfect example of not needing to write out a long poem to express your feelings.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Kes
Wow, this is pretty... uh, wow! I love it. I actually got goosebumbs reading it, and very few things can give me goosebumbs!
I could feel it all, I could see it all. I'm impressed, to say the least.
Great!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Even though this poem is short there is a lot of emotion in is. I could see the girl in the halls and crying very vividly. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very emotional...short verses are indeed powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


very powerful, yet nice and short it sounds like you lost someone dear...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and simple, but packed with so very much emotion... I absolutely loved it...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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haay everyone, I'm a dutch teenage girl (so please don't mind my bad english) I mostly write to clear my head, because somehow i just can't stop thinking.. XD I like meeting new people.. Feel fr.. more..

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