Elated Premature Pleasures

Describing how lost one is about the first time they face a situation that leads to sexual tension and actions being transpired as a result of pubescent hormones

Elated premature pleasure
It begins, I ask her, "Has anything else been inserted in your anus?"
W/< than grrreat! effort
I find myself manipulating my way, maybe not so, she isn't drunk, I am, Kellogg's and milk should do it,
Fondling her vaginal intersection.
Much like LA traffic it seems like a one way street during a standstill, drivers don't like to merge. Mother fuckers rubbernecking, she just seems to lay there but my shaft is stick shift hard.
Beep, beep, alarm clock sounds, lubricated latex ring fills with fluids only previously known after watching Slutload.
Very much V focused
I had succeeded
Almost effortless, no errorless
The feeling compares to finding a Timex
But realizing the X is backwards
Ouch!
Damn, just to think that only a glance at those naked toes did it
Premature pleasure, at least I think I thought I heard a purr coming from her kitty cat.
Meow
Could have been a yawn but then again I didn't even drag it along
Five maybe fifteen minutes when talking to the guys is all it lasted

Author's Note

I want to know if it's direct but also allows the reader to add their own imagination as to how the whole scene looks and act takes place. If the naievness is palpable

Reviews

[Kelsey Schadt]

Hi! After reading your piece I have a suggestion. At first the reader seems very technical in their language (inserted, anus, vaginal intersection) but then uses colloquialisms (shaft, V-focused). It doesn't seem to match up. I would work on defining a voice for your speaker.

[J. Allen Hewitt]

Not bad :) very nice.
do you actually listen to Herb Alpert or are you just in love with Dolores Erickson like so many others ??? LOL (I do both ;) )