Earth and Sky

Earth and Sky

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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a haiku

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Eagle wings spread far
Cast shadows on earth from sky
Sharp talons take food


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8/26/18
(I hope you can take time to sit and listen to the video too)





© 2018 Einstein Noodle



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I love this video I have watched it many times before and I’ve watched the bald headed eagles in Alaska the most beautiful powerful mystical being ever- sacred to the cultures up Nirth- their piercing cries warns and challenges the spirit as the fly free the king above many- one thing in life we can only be certain of is change- not always easy but best for growth and destiny- difficult paths lead to beautiful places- from pain comes beauty- wonderful words-🌹

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

yes yes yes! you capture my full intent ... i found the video after the haiku and was as stunned by .. read more



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HAIKUS are an endless canvas. Asking for balance and screaming with power.
The video is a perfect coupling for your poem
And if a thermal I could climb I'd ride the wind and chase my shadow.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

Cherrie.... thank you so much for your generous kindness in reviewing ...i had a very special experi.. read more
A very haunting and beautiful video, and what a lovely idea for the re-birth of this magnificent bird.
Haiku and video go together so well :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

yes...i love that video too ...thank you for reviewing another of my poems Stella! your comments are.. read more
Stella Armour

4 Months Ago

A pleasure my friend,:)
I'll admit, my internet has been so spotty for months, I haven't been likely to click on videos, but this one is well worth it. Nice to be back to the living, as far as modern computer & internet *wink! wink!* Since I've been aware of Native American spirituality since my 30's, I've known the meaning of eagle, which is similar to Great Spirit, in my mind. The way your poem is stated, it suggests that Great Spirit (thru messenger Eagle) throws shadows on our lives. People question this like it shouldn't happen. But why not? Life is for learning. Are we supposed to be coddled thru it? Then your last line is a little ambivalent in my mind, as far as suggesting that the eagle may be taking food FROM me or FOR me . . . an interesting juxtaposition with regard to seeing Eagle as messenger of Great Spirit. All in all, it's pretty remarkable to summon this much in my early-morning mind with only 17 syllables *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thank you for reading with depth and sensitivity Margie ... your review makes sharing worthwhile ..... read more
Hi there, missed reading you


Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

Cassie... and i have missed you..got to get on over to your pages asap :) thanks for reviewing dear .. read more
loved the write,loved the video

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

your few words bring much appreciation Word ;)
E.
 wordman

6 Months Ago

lol,i just don`t say much e,but i covered it all
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

yes you do sir! :)
A perfect flight I love Eagles** there was this video in Fort Myers Florida showing the birth of baby eagles this so reminded me of that all over the world people were watching this is so tranquil just my right speed a wonderful addition indeed thanks for liking my computer eye of Einstein Lol

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

tranquility is reflected in a lot of places ;) bless you for looking for it
ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON

6 Months Ago

Yes Have a good flight
An excellent haiku on the potency and power of this beautiful predator. A great job done of showing, E. I love it. I’ll listen to the video soon enough and let you know how I liked it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Wow...that feels like an almost mystical experience to me, E. Eagles are attributed with divine powe.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

his wing span was at least 7 ft.... very big indeed ... lots of wonderful things happened after that.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Months Ago

Seven feet!!! Enough to fit in a man and more! That's something!
and that is what nature had bequeath us but then we always have had doubts and they remain unappreciated and most of the times unfavored

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

what an interesting review sette! not appreciating doubt ...i am going to take that with me today .... read more
I've been meaning to review this piece for quite some time now and to watch the video - forgive my laziness :x
I love the video and the information shared in it, as well as your haiku. I think it's an art to convey imagery through so few words and you excel in it here. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks Doc! i really like the video too ... and the eagles ... mystic creatures to the max says i! ;.. read more
I’m always impressed by haiku. It’s a form that eludes me.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks for visiting Momzilla ... they can be a lot of fun ... i can never remember which is which an.. read more

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