Rose Colored Glasses

Rose Colored Glasses

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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you tell me! ;)

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                                                Rose Colored Glasses
prisms
rose and glass
clinking them i drink
scented fresh Chardonnay  
bouquet red blush
pulling on one leg at a time
i wear cotton fast to sleep
little worlds of bliss
a kiss
i pray my soul to keep
11/03/2018
E.

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I love it very interesting piece.


prisms

rose and glass
clinking them i drink
scented fresh Chardonnay
bouquet red blush


Thank you for sharing
my friend


Posted 2 Months Ago


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49 Years Ago

i 'got' the first stanza but not he 2nd.
i couldn't quite 'get' the juxtaposition of the 2 stanzas, a bit too esoteric for my brain, einstein.
then reading the comments from junglee & ardra i understood the whole poem.
it seems i have to read people's comments for my brain to comprehend your 'sui generis' poetry.
but i keep trying !
cheerio carola

Posted 2 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

my friend this is one amazing poem... giving me something to ponder on deeply about the depth of love

Posted 3 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Sounds like the night time prayer of a lonesome dove. He sounds contented but still somehow longing for the romantic side of life?

Posted 3 Months Ago


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49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

Hi,
Long time no read!
This is really interesting. I personally think it is very important to see both ends of the spectrum, so I relate this.
Hope you're doing well. I apologise for my absence. I am in college now.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

after a long days maceration, I tend to blush at such prose.... My sister (an artist) once told me that everything is violet upon leaving home to never return so i bought a pair of purple sunglasses and have worn them ever since, so I have to agree with her. Very contemplative writing Mr Noodle!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

we all need rose coloured glasses sometimes to see only the good and warmth around us :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Very nice. It somehow made me think about a person taking their last drink and then dying in their sleep.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

this is a sweet little poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

This one reads as a sweet poem E. :)
Nice one...a warm pink glow when the loved one wraps you up in a cocoon of cotton....:))

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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49 Years Ago


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