The Deep

The Deep

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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this is a lipogram i wrote for a class (same class the cinquaine was written for) the lipogram, for those who are unfamiliar with, is a poem using one vowel only. i chose "E"

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"The Deep"


The endless Ether
left deep clefts                                        
heed me
keep knees free

                                     enter the descent

                                                                     Hell's decree bends the rent

See me!?

Steep we creep


Spent.

Endless Ether we flee


11/28/2018
E.


© 2019 Einstein Noodle



Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
I struggled to have a theme ... would really like to know if you have a sense of one .. :}

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It’s a different kind of creative joy when we are able to produce worthwhile expression within the limitation of format and structure. For me that’s the supreme kind of satisfaction. I read the endless twists, turns and bends as we navigate, crawl, hurtle through the all pervading ether to our ordained ends. Appreciated very much, E 💕

Posted 3 Months Ago


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DIVYA

3 Months Ago

Oh bedtime then! :)
GoodMorning hugs! And do grab a bit of sleep :))))
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

headed that way now ;)
DIVYA

3 Months Ago

.......😉☺️😊.......



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An exceptional poem. That takes you places. Deeper, dark and descending into the pit of hell. Great images that explode inside your mind's eye on reading and exploring the images it gives you too.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

you are very kind Dawn ... the lipogram was not easy for me ... using it to say something worthwhile.. read more
Dawn

3 Weeks Ago

You did a wonderful job in your lipogram Einstein. I do agree digging more causes danger. :)
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

;) ........................
Wow! very impressed with the picture you've portrayed within this poetic format.. and thanks for teaching me a new form! i'll have to give it a go.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

oh my goodness lizard! i hope it doesn't curse you :) not easy for me at all ... for a free verse pe.. read more
lizardbrain

3 Weeks Ago

it might force me to give at least a modicum of thought and revision to my poems that they currently.. read more
I fear any sort of descent ~ especially into the unknown. Get the feeling of a fearful potholer ~ the fealr of being trapped! Your piece though short tells a lot! Cleverly put.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

hey kitty! thanks for checking this one out ... i feel pretty gratified all those things came across.. read more
kitty

1 Month Ago

The extraordinary is always a fascinating subject. We wonder too about the supernatural!
This is clever and witty and yet........................................................Enjoyed it but simply too difficult to emulate!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thanks always for your time John ... sure appreciate it ... not an easy form for sure ... would not .. read more
This is fun i must try doing one of these when my brain is functioning properly.. (once or twice a month me thinks) death waits for no man nor bunny my friend :) and in my case he visits quite often:( brilliantly composed as usual. thanks for the thought food!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

its (death) a faithful and constant companion isn't it ;) ...at any age :( ... the form was definite.. read more
Firstly, since I came across your cinquain, I have got addicted and filled half a notebook. So I guess that this will be what the other half is for, but I doubt I will be anywhere near as sucesful as your amazing mind.This is just so good and original, that im beginning to doubt I am awake...i certainly wont be tonighy as I crumple page after page in a vain effort to emulate your excellence.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

flattery will get you everywhere my friend ;) ..but..seriously ..thank you so much for this generous.. read more
Lorry

2 Months Ago

You're welcome. Think i'll stick to a collection of my favourites, but might be a while as I will di.. read more
Wonderful use of words. Each line with reason and a purpose. If we dance with the devil. The devil shall lead. Thank you Einstein for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yes Coyote Man! we do not win taking on the devil ... once engaged we already lost :( then the shame.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

I liked this poem and you are welcome my friend.
dear E... a beautiful Concerto of love in the waking and falling deeper in love. The clefts of romance are symbols of composing a dream come true. As ever, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

oh Pat! i love your review ...yes..the love bug is all you say isn't it ... our poetic minds and hea.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

Yes... romance is the rising of the Sun like honey on a bun... sweet and content ...
The thing I like most about your poem is how you use double-e words quite a bit. Not sure if this qualifies as a theme, but if this were a song, this would certainly be your sweet note "eeeeee"! *smile* I admire you for seeking further knowledge & practice & community, in regards to your writing. You have a strong sense of community, when it comes to your approach to writing! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

well Ms. Barley ... at least reading did not drive you screeming eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek into .. read more
barleygirl

2 Months Ago

I am sitting at my computer with the lazy sun just barely clearing the ridge finally, to spill some .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

awwwwwwwww .... i like the front ;) and some Bailey's ... its a golden moment with the sun on your b.. read more
Wow! This is thought-provoking. I read it a few times and it reminded me of our existence from cradle to grave, although that may not have been your intent.

I was reading where you reference increasing your vocabulary to stave off Alzheimer's and I recently found that coconut oil helps with this condition. Check it out! I take coconut oil capsules.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Tamara Beryl Latham

2 Months Ago

No, just take the capsules. Check out the information on Alzheimer's and coconut oil on google.
read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

i will.... thanks Tamara!!
Tamara Beryl Latham

2 Months Ago

Happy New Year!

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