The Maze

The Maze

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

The Maze
frenetic winds like contrails 
whispering through the chambers
one man
one woman
turning twisting reaching
                                      rising 
falling 
hips sway lips say
unknown  -   invisible need moans  -
'round corners of unadorned halls                                                                           
virgin 
empty quiet apprehensions of
two minds tumbled out of a spin cycle
set at opposites 
THE DOOR! 
18 yr old boy ... 16 yr. old girl ...... 
facing flint and steel sparks in an instant fade from fire yet
deepening molten embers glow
true light to pierce the time
3/31/2019
E.
Image result for endless stairs painting
Escher's inspired stairs

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


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I dunno why but I just come over all emotional, and that aint like me.. I was hoping I might find something new from ya Gene, and blimey.. some find.. this must surely rank among my favourite poems of yours my friend... bloomin well done might sound like a cliche methinks, but tis part of me now and I sincerely mean, bloomin well done... Maybe I am beginning to feel my years and hanker after moments past.. but you sure got me this mane.... Am bound to revisit this page over and over... Neville :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

thanks Neville ... your the brother i never had ;) and i am very happy this one has gone to the top .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago

all those things back at ya Gene and true..... and yes.. you do have a unique style & what a pleasur.. read more



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Interesting write but kind of sad. I enjoyed

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

can you expand on the sadness you felt? i am curious about that, Cassie ...
E.
understanding your forst sensual emotions is indeed like finding your way through a maze, never quite knowing the right way forward and feeling unsure as to the rising heat that drives you on ... until, the damn bursts and the first real afterglow is the path you were inadvertently seeking..

Posted 4 Years Ago


Stella Armour

4 Years Ago

if only we could have the wisdom of age in our youth ... would that not be a wonderful thing?
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

i'm not so sure about that Stella ...might take all the fun out of it :))))))))))))))))))))))))) lik.. read more
Stella Armour

4 Years Ago

Hahaha ... maybe &(*.*)&
it is one hell of an emotional writing.. the confusion the doubting and the learning along the way makes it an interesting read

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

oh how we stumble along the love raod don't we sette? ... what a great review .. thank you for takin.. read more
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Wow ! Neville isn't the only one awe strucked.. Perfect poem and Music combo. Put me right where you wanted us. I felt enchantedly at another place and time With my first Love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

ohhhhhhh my luv, Cryin' Kate!!!! i am so happy to see your here! at the Cafe' ..on me pages once aga.. read more
Honestly. ... emotive for the strangest reasons. ... I didn't hear echoes of my own love-past. .... but imagined my mother and birth-father.
The ages are right... however their light did not pierce time... it shone until I was 2.
Emotive write my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

not from your own echoes?? but emotive ...how very interesting indeed Sharon .. there is much more t.. read more
sharonlee

4 Years Ago

No I've never really been inpired or pulled in that direction... my own echoes of love I have, of co.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

ahahaha i have lots of those imagined :} love on ya Sharon!!
so difficult to navigate love and such when so young
i love the flow and dance of this. I think you've touched on something that creates deep feelings within the reader, remembering...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing Ana! so nice to see you 'round this ol' Cafe' :) that's kind of the place this .. read more
Papaya

4 Years Ago

:) you're welcome and it's good to see you too (:
Memory lane of youth who went through the motions and emotions. I love how you narrate the story and feed us with great wisdom lessons. How things change and evolve! How the maze is unknown and then is solved! Memory can indeed pierce the time and go through the emotions. Your style sir is original and unique.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow! You are good. . You are welcome.
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

you are very kind Sami! thank you.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

::: )))))))))))))
Young love and intimacy just isn't what it used to be... is it E? I am so wrapped in the essence of this! swoon~~~~

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

oh my goodness ... i am feeling me cheeks warming and turning red :) so very gratified this affected.. read more
Even tho this is about "young love" . . . it could be about any age love. I love the way you use the artwork & theme of "maze" to describe how tangled up it can feel. I am catching a hint of danger here, as well as the simmering passions. I hate to say this, but I had a fleeting moment when I was thinking of two young lovers in a crowded place with multiple floors/stairs, torn between the attraction they have for each other & then having that moment ripped apart by a mass shooting. It's so sad that this is so top-of-mind these days, I can't even read a poem without having it cross my mind! But I'm more likely to read "danger" as being the unpredictability of young love, not a mass shooting! I love your writing & the way you use single-word lines for emphasis (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

oh my goodness Margie!!! your comments speak to the atrocities in the news are way too many .. with .. read more
You deal with this eternal theme beautifully. And Escher's 'going up' and 'going down' at the same time' print, reflects the precariousness of our first attractions. A change of voice? Good for you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

yes ... a change ;) thank you always for your kind support Auntie! glad you enjoyed ... funny how a .. read more
Great Aunt Astri

4 Years Ago

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