Relevant, silent, desolate

Relevant, silent, desolate

A Poem by A hare off

Mornings creep along

Fashioned in their own existence,

Relevant, silent, desolate

Situated right behind

Empty moments

Motioning forward

Except for the spelling

They should all be sad

© 2016 A hare off


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Mornings can be a problem for many especially those suffering from depression, who may find they feel slightly better as the day progresses. The word choice in these lines indicate the loneliness and emptyness felt. Sad that is.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch Christine.
Haha- what a cute way to describe the morning! I'm jealous now! Like a little ninja..... Creeps up on you and attacks! How nice!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Many kind thank yous for your comment
This is sad but exqusite. A perfect moment if you like.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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I'm Anthony, but my friends call me A hare off - long story for another time. I hope a few will enjoy some of what I write. I am from the northeast U.S. more..

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