I saw a butterfly today

I saw a butterfly today

A Poem by A hare off

I saw a butterfly today

happily floating on a breeze

and I thought of her

 

Her wonderful smile

and that cute little laugh

that always made me smile

 

The way she looked at me

with those beautiful eyes

taking my breath away

 

When she kissed me,

her soft lips warming

my entire body

 

Her carefree spirit

and how excited she would

get about the littlest things

 

The way she held me,

filling me with more love

than I could have dreamed of

 

I looked again

and the butterfly was gone,

she was my butterfly

© 2018 A hare off


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So delicate the caress of a beautiful creature....so warming the feel that true love gives. Uplifting write. Thank you for sharing this thought.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment Kitty
I LOVE butterflies so I had to read this, Your true butterfly is SHE and she is still with You, I like this verse, it shows how She is really connected to the butterfly,

(Her carefree spirit
and how excited she would
get about the littlest things)

simple and sweet.


Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your nice comment. I enjoy butterflies too, they always seem to carefree and happy.
It is light and flows gracefully, much like a butterfly. I will agree with everyone else, it sounds happy and sweet, only for that happiness to flutter away in the end, but it remained enchanting.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I am happy you liked it.
sweet, but definitely hits a sad note too

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thank you I am happy you enjoyed it.
what a sweet sweet poem. I still can't decide if it's a happy or a sad poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

It was meant to be sad but if some see it as happy that is okay with me. Thank you for reading and c.. read more
This is such an adorable, wonderful, sweet poem of love. I truly enjoyed this. Made me smile big time.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A hare off

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dawn. I am happy you smiled.
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Anthony you have a romantic soul. And that is beautiful.

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