Short Sentiment

Short Sentiment

A Poem by MySecretMuse

When I look at them,

I see nothing.

When I look at you,

I see galaxies. 


© 2016 MySecretMuse



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MySecretMuse
It's short, I know, but it was just a thought I had. Review if you'd like, I review back.

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Short and perfect. Sometimes that's all that's needed

Posted 2 Years Ago


An enjoyable and lovely piece. It keeps things simple and sweet and it speaks of something that most everyone has seen in one person at some point.
And in each case we pray there are no stray black holes looming in the center of those galaxies... =D

Thanks for sharing!
Aaron

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful. A perfect poem for love. When we see the galaxies in our lover's eyes. We know the sweetness of paradise. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


That is all a woman could ask for

Posted 2 Years Ago


MySecretMuse

2 Years Ago

Lol I'm the woman XD but thank you for your review!!
Lingering Soul

2 Years Ago

I meant that all one could ask for as a woman to see another in this way lol
Beautiful! From the heart and intense...really like this :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Galaxies. Very good poem, short but sweet. Excellent work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MySecretMuse

2 Years Ago

Thanks jesse!!
Short, sweet, and simple.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MySecretMuse

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!!
Packs a punch and says more than such a short piece should. There is always one star that we see shining brightest. Great job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MySecretMuse

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Are you serious? I don't think the thoughts that your 'short' poem producing are short, it is speaking so much more than the poem looks like....The last word 'galaxies' made it amazing....Thought provoking and sweet.....Full ratings!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MySecretMuse

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! You've been such a big help to me on wc and I've only been here a few days haha .. read more

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