To go to narnia

I want to be like Lucy

I want to be like Jill

I want to go to Narnia 

Where I hope I'll fit in too

Where my life would be right

Where I could ride for my delight

In Narnia 

Where I feel I could finally fit in.

Author's Note

yeah i would rather be there

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Haha, soo fits what we're messaging about right now.....

[rachylou]

I wouldnt want to go there im afraid of lions

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Yes! I love Narnia too!! It is my absolute favorite!! I find when I read it over and over again...I get a lot of inspiration from it! :)

[LunarSong]

Yeah, I have dreams of going to Narnia! Nice poem

[Rose of Gondor]

T.T I want to be in Narnia too!!!!!!! It would be so fun and awesome and dangerous and awesome (did i say awesome twice?) AND IT WOULD BE SOOOO NICE! Alas! I am stuck here in a world without magic....

[Rae]

Wow. I suppose everyone has their sanctuary but I've never heard one like this. Keep writing!!

[Dearantlers]

I so agree! I would LOVE to be in Narnia right now, instead of here. At least there you don't have to do homework ;-)

[Freeminded]

Some of these lines don't fit, well they sort of do, but I'm sure you cpuld find lines that fit better, if you get what this nutter has to say. Like I always say, forget about this poem, come back in a month, and you'll see what needs improving :))