Time goes by

Time goes by

A Poem by rae52

Rabbits hop
Cars stop
Cows graze
Fires blaze
Birds fly
Time 
Goes
By

© 2011 rae52


Author's Note

rae52
bit like words rhyme

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CUTE

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its kind of sweet and cute poem:)
rhyme goes well..time always goes by
life always move on no matter what..
thanks for sharing it with me:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is awesome!! it's so short, simple, and cute, yet holds a lot of meaning. I can just see the images play in my head. This poem reminds me of summer :) Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute :) and not tometion its really easy to write a comment on thisss. i loved this really short poem that, by the way, i am looking at when i should be getting ready for school in an hour :/ lol keep writingg!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have a really great way of capturing small things and moments, thoughts that no one else might catch and I love that :) Great write, it may be short but his a lot to say..thanks for posting!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep, that is sometimes how time goes by! Dancing Fish-Very cute rhyme too!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crickets chirp
grasshoppers jump
poetry grows
like moss on a stump!

Very cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Definitely unique to boredom's ink.

Chuckling here,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVED it! I love how you rhymed it, and just the random words that you used. It's perfect!!! Thanks for the rr.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute and random. :) Love it!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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