Here comes the dragon

idea from smaug in the hobbit

Dragon in the sky

Fire on the cliffs

Dragon wants a barbeque

Better move quick

 

Dragon getting closer

Just about to land

Don’t run to the wood

Or to the sand

 

There go the archers

Moving in quick

About to get burnt

The smoke is thick

 

The dragons on the floor

But where is the hero

Say not that he has fallen

And add to our sorrow

 

There is the hero

With his bow of yew

Forever he will be remembered

The dragon he slew

Author's Note

what do you think didn't take me that long

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

I loved it!!! You are such an amazing poet. You should write a book with all your poetry, and I bet that you'd get it published, and become a best sellar, because your poems are awesome. There are a few places where the flow is a little off, but if you read through it in a few days, I know that you'll be able to fix it.

[rachylou]

The dragon may have just wanted to play D:

[Laura E. Aranda]

There is the hero

With his bow of yew

Forever he will be remembered

Our hero




that is the best stanza of all
Keep on writing!!!!!!!

[Freeminded]

I love this!! Though...i feel that the last line of the second stanza doesn't quite fit...just have another look at that... and in the last stanza maybe 'with his bow of yew' should be something like 'with his mighty bow of yew'?? Something like that... but overall really really well done!!

[Megan]

Aw it sounds like a great story :) in..poem form haha. This was such a fun read and it was so entertaining! Wonderful write, thanks for posting!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Great fun poem. Good descriptions. I really like the briefness rhyme, has a great rhythem to it! :))

[Rose of Gondor]

I was laughing my head off at teh "dragon watns a barbeque, better move quick" part. Funny!!!!! Love the description of dragons! Lovely poem!

I like it. :) It seems formal but it's not hard to read and it's fun.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like it very enjoyable :)

I like this. simple yet it paints a good picture.