the talking blade

dig me down into your veins

let yourself feel the pain

 

slice me down into your perfect skin

your skin will never look this perfect again

 

you lnow you what me

you know you need me

 

i love you so very much

so pick me up, lets just touch

 

i promise you no more sorrow

as long as you come back to me tommorrow

 

i tell no lies i am not tempting you

you know this is what you must do

 

come on dumb a*s you must work

dont make me look like a jerk

 

i am the answer to your problems

so find me let me solve them

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Interesting poem, I liked your poem, but have never been a fan of the blade, I think there are a lot of better ways to solve problems.

[chiisu]

the blade lies don't trust a word it says for you could soon be dead....damn it stop it do i have to come over and slap you again....you are like a little sister and if you hurt yourself you know how many people care for you!?....please....please stop...