Fear of Etcetera

Fear of Etcetera

A Poem by Rafy T.Nyx

My fear! Let your wings be extended.
 We have a kingdom to conquer.
 You embrace me with your dark shadows.
 Your dark soul lacks my tear.

 My fear! Set your eyes at the sky.
 Angels are falling as snowflakes.
 All the faults and accusations are ours' only.
 Your inner heart is flowing with my tear.

© 2016 Rafy T.Nyx



Author's Note

Rafy T.Nyx
This lyrics is actually from my past years and was written based on an instant emotion,so please excuse the less creative structure.

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This is a great poem. I like it. It has some good concrete images. this does bring the poem to life. First stanza is dark-representing the darkness of the soul to conquer lands.
The lighter shadow represents the final crusade almost. The imagery works well with it. even balance of action and imagery

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rafy T.Nyx

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot for your detailed review.

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Added on December 16, 2015
Last Updated on January 19, 2016
Tags: fear, depression, insecurity

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Rafy T.Nyx
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A young writer with intense love and passion for literature. I prefer dark fantasy, gothic fantasy and psychological thriller genres for writing poems and flash fictions, adorning my works with me.. more..

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